I am a Year 8 student at Saint Pius X Catholic School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the SPX Nu'u Learning Space and my teachers are Mrs Tui and Mrs Lauchlan.
Summer Learning Journey Day 2 Bonus Activity - Week 2
My Head will go weird because im very scared,when I woke up the Sun had a blare,Crashing was my fear,Seeing that we were landing made me feel safe,go out of the plane and said "Hello my name is Nate".
Hey there Jerome, my name is Billy from the Summer Learning Journey programme. Welcome and congratulations on completing so many activities. I am really impressed!
This poem is fantastic! I really like some of the language you have used such as 'blare' and 'crashing'. I like the parts that rhyme, it reads really well and sounds cool.
I think you really understand what it would have been like to be a member of the flight crew and experiencing different emotions.
If you were in a war, do you think you would be a fighter pilot? Or perhaps something different?
Hey there Jerome, my name is Billy from the Summer Learning Journey programme. Welcome and congratulations on completing so many activities. I am really impressed!
ReplyDeleteThis poem is fantastic! I really like some of the language you have used such as 'blare' and 'crashing'. I like the parts that rhyme, it reads really well and sounds cool.
I think you really understand what it would have been like to be a member of the flight crew and experiencing different emotions.
If you were in a war, do you think you would be a fighter pilot? Or perhaps something different?
Thanks, Billy
Hi jerome
ReplyDeleteMy name is Sarah and I go to Glen Innes School
This poem is outstanding
If you were in a war what would you do?