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Tuesday 19 December 2017

Summer Learning Journey Day 2 Bonus Activity - Week 2



My Head will go weird because im very scared,when I woke up the Sun had a blare,Crashing was my fear,Seeing that we were landing made me feel safe,go out of the plane and said "Hello my name is Nate".


2 comments:

  1. Hey there Jerome, my name is Billy from the Summer Learning Journey programme. Welcome and congratulations on completing so many activities. I am really impressed!

    This poem is fantastic! I really like some of the language you have used such as 'blare' and 'crashing'. I like the parts that rhyme, it reads really well and sounds cool.

    I think you really understand what it would have been like to be a member of the flight crew and experiencing different emotions.

    If you were in a war, do you think you would be a fighter pilot? Or perhaps something different?

    Thanks, Billy

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  2. Hi jerome
    My name is Sarah and I go to Glen Innes School
    This poem is outstanding
    If you were in a war what would you do?

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