I landed on the moon, and it felt like I was in a cartoon, I achieved my goal, and I got to the moon whole. It felt really weird, but because I was kinda scared, I kinda teared. I travelled back to my ship, on the way back to Earth I did a flip. I then ate a mint, and thought that this was a great experiment.
Talofa Lava Jerome,
ReplyDeleteIts me Christopher,
Your poem is astonishing.
But what was your goal? How did it feel like a cartoon?
Besides that you did an amazing job!
Keep it up!
Kind regards
Christopher
Kia Ora Jerome,
ReplyDeleteWhat an awesome poem. I loved how you have made it rhyme! I would have never thought about rhyming goal and whole but it definitely works. I can imagine it would have been a very scary trip but I’m sure Neil Armstrong was very brave, especially to be the first man on the moon. Do you think you would ever want to go to the moon? I would! It would be amazing to explore the moon as well as playing around with the lack of gravity on the moon.
Keep up the awesome work!
Blog ya later,
Dani